Week 7 Story: The Golden Gun Origin Stories
There once was a legend of a preacher
in the West that only was known by the name of R. Some say it stood for reverend,
others said it they called him that because when someone challenged him to a
shootout, when they yelled “Draw!” no one had ever made it past the letter r
before they found a bullet between their eyes. The preacher is most notably known
for his stand off with the infamous Joel which you can read in my story here. But, although he is well known for his good
doings around the West and cleaning up the towns, little is known about the
origins of this preacher. Well, that is, until now.
It was
1856, right before the boom of the “Old West” as we know it now. A tiny town in
upstate Montana was home to a young man that was fascinated by all things cowboy.
He quickly learned how to rope and ride and decided that he should try his luck
on a cattle drive that was headed South to deliver a herd to Abilene. He knew that
it was a dangerous trek but loved the idea of being a real cowboy on the trail.
The first few months of riding went well for this young man and he began to get
the hang of keeping the herd together. All was going fine until the group found
themselves caught in a thunderstorm in Nebraska. The sky was filled with huge
thunder clouds as dark as night and lightning seemed to strike only inches from
their horses. Thunder clapped and rumbled. Soon the cows were running in all
directions. The boy soon found himself at the head of a stampede. His horse
bucked and tossed him off. Lying on the ground, certain that the shadow of
death was going to soon fall over him, the young man began to pray out loud to
God saying, “Please Lord don’t let me die here in the rain and the mud! Save me
from this position and I will serve you forever!” God must have been listening because
as that boy laid there on the ground, eyes closed, the cattle seemed to divert
around him and did not touch him even once. When he pulled himself together and
decided to look up he found the sun beginning to peak through the storm clouds
and knew at that moment what he must do. He went out in search of his horse to
begin his ride back to his home town where he would ask his preacher to mentor
him and begin his rode toward becoming a servant of the Lord himself.
About twenty
years had passed and the young boy was now a man. He was the towns preacher now,
as his teacher before him had passed on from old age. He had a small
congregation of only ten or fifteen people because the town was so small and also
everyone began to move South and West toward California in search of gold. He knew
he had to keep serving God because of his promise but was not sure if preaching
to ten souls a week was what the Lord had in find for him. He had begun to hear
of all the evil that was now spreading across the West in forms of bandits, robbers,
and gangs. He was not sure what God wanted of him but decided he need to go
meditate on this thought. He heard of a place just across the border in Canada
where natives used to go. It was a very spiritual place that was said to be touched
by God and thus had a powerful connection with the spirits.
Even
though it was the middle of January very cold, the preacher knew he could wait
no longer and must go seek out this scared place. He made his way into Canada
and into the dense evergreen forests. On his way he knew he must look out for
mountain lions, bears, and spirits of the forest that would wish to do him
harm. After wondering about for close to a month he came across a group of
natives. He asked them about the location of the place he was seeking. After
telling him his reasons, they shared with him the direction of where he wished
to go. It was deeper into the forest. He would know when he got their because
there was a crystal-clear lake that seemed to just drop off from the shore and
fall to a depth of 100 feet. In the middle of the lake however, was a tree
rooting up from the water. He made his way in and finally after a week more of wondering
found himself at the shores of the lake. It was deathly quite in this place
with no sounds of animals or wind. He sat there, made a fire, and began praying
to god asking him what it was he wanted. Repeatedly, he would pray saying, “Lord,
please come to me and tell me what you desire of me.” After a little over a
week the preacher began to become very hungry because there were no animals in
this holy place. He laid by the fire and still praying was overcame by hunger.
At that moment he heard a voice coming from the fire. He was not sure if he was
hallucinating from being starved to almost death or not. He listened closed and
heard the voice in the fire say to him, “My servant, whom I am greatly pleased
with. You have fulfilled your promise to me perfectly. Now, I ask that you
serve me in a different manner.” The preacher asked the fire what it is that
the Lord would have him do? The Sprit of God answered, “Take your rifle that
you have used to hunt this wilderness and throw it into this fire.” The
preacher did what was asked of him. Suddenly as the rifle hit the flame the
fire shot up into the air in a great column and then in an instant the fire ceased
to be there.
Sitting underneath a pile of ash the preacher could see something glistening.
He reached through the ash and picked up a golden revolver. The voice seemed to
come from all around him now and spoke saying, “Take this pistol and holster
and go about the West. Clean up all the foulness that has come about and bring
peace to the people. This golden pistol will aid you in your travels making you
quicker on the draw than other man alive.” With this being said, the preacher
picked himself up off the ground, wrapped the belt and holster around his waist
and slipped the golden revolver into it. He then began his journey South.
Author's Notes
I decided to do a weapon origin story that was from a previous
story that I wrote “The Preacher in the West”. This story really gives not only
a background to the magical pistol but also a little bit of a background to the
Preacher himself. I came across a story in this weeks reading, “Arjuna and
Shiva” that I thought would work perfectly for me for the story I had in mind.
In the original story from the Mahabharata, Arjuna goes out into the forest
around the Himalayan Mountain where he prays and worships the God of the mountains
in hopes of receiving weapons that he could use. He stayed and worship for many
days and finally he had to stop because he was going to be attacked by a boar.
As he was about to shoot the boar his arrow crossed paths with another that was
shot by the God of the mountain himself. Later in the story he gives Arjuna
weapons that he would later use. In my story I kept most of the same concepts
about going into the forest and finding a spiritual place but instead God comes
to the preacher in means a fire and air not physical being. In both stories the
main character receives a great weapon though.
Bibliography
Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists by Sister Nivedita (1914)
Kasey, The Wild west setting was a very cool choice for this story, I had never thought about transposing any of the Mahabhartha into a western locale, but reading your story it is definitely something that works and adds an interesting dimension while retaining the original narrative. My favorite part has to be the gifting of the divine weapon, your words definitely place the picture in the reader's minds that you were trying to create.
ReplyDeleteKasey, I really enjoyed reading this story! I liked how you completely changed the setting of the story. I like that you utilized dialogue because it livened your story and made me feel like I was a part of the action! To improve this story, I think you should separate your dialogue from your paragraphs, because it was sometimes hard to read. Along with that, your story is very long, so maybe you could summarize some points that you elaborated on! Overall, great job!
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