Week 3 Story: The Magic Shoes
It was a Friday night and all of Lakewood Highschool was
gearing up for the homecoming basketball match up against their hated rivals Mulberry
High. Lakewood had high hopes for a state championship this year with Manny Rodriguez
leading the way. These aspirations from the preseason, however, had not quite
lived up to their hype. Manny had been in a shooting slump and seemed to average
almost double-digit turnovers a game. This was a basketball school though and
none of the students or faculty was going to give up on this team. Manny on the
other hand was having a tough time wondering what was going on with his
abilities. He kind of moped around school that day not really getting into the
homecoming spirt. Instead, at lunch time Manny went downtown to walk around by
himself. He had hoped that maybe it would get his mind right and clear his head
for the game that evening. While he was walking by a shop he happened to look
through the window and see a pair of vintage Larry Bird shoes. They looked like
they had never been out of the box and were like nothing Manny had ever seen in
his life. He loved the way they looked and figured he could use some new kicks
for homecoming, so he went in and bought them.
That night
Manny was putting on his jersey and getting ready for the game. The five
starters from Mulberry bust into the locker room and began to talk trash to the
Lakewood players, and rightfully so. Lakewood like I said had been on a losing
skid as of lake while Mulberry on the other hand had been winning handily
against their opponents. Finally, the coaches were able to restore the peace to
the locker room and the team finished getting ready. Manny, taking a last look
at his knew shoes before slipping them on his feet, seemed to hear whispers
coming in the shoes direction. He held them up to his ear and sure enough he
could hear them saying, “If your open, shoot it all night”. He thought that he
had gone crazy but went on preparing for the game. The coach walked out of his
office and into the locker room. The team went over their match ups and the
coach gave his final inspiratory speech. Manny could hear the buzzer of the
scoreboard sound, signaling that the girls game was over, and it was time for the
boys to warm up. The two foes rushed onto the court and began warming up.
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A Larry Bird Converse magic shoes from pristine.com. |
The starters
were called out one by one and finally it was time for tip off. Lakewood got the
tip and threw the ball to Manny who immediately shot a deep three ball from the
corner of the court. Swish! Right through the basket. This seemed to set the
pace for the night as Manny went on to have a career high of 42 points with 27
of them coming from three. All he could think of after the game was how the
shoes seemed to talk to him, telling him where and when to shoot. Manny would keep
these shoes only wore them on game days. They were his secret weapon. Any team
that stood in Lakewood’s way the rest of the year was defeated by at least
double digits. Winning the state tournament, Manny had become a legendary
player at Lakewood that would be remembered forever.
Authors Notes
I used the story "Thataka" as my old story that I changed up. If you read the story "Thataka" It is about how Rama first did battle with a demon. He slayed the demon fairly easily and after wards was rewarded weapons that he could later use against other beasts. I modified the story by changing the scene, characters and flipping the story around a little. Instead of Manny receiving something after the game I made it to where he received his "weapon" if you will of the shoes before the game. Manny still did battle with a hated foe and won handily just like Rama.
Bibliography
Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie (1913).
Hey Kasey! You did a good job making this story you own. It is sufficiently different from the original “Thataka” story, and the modern twist on it makes the story very readable. The amount of detail that went into describing the background of the two schools was impressive and it gave life to the characters and teams that were in the world.
ReplyDeleteHey Kasey. When I first read your story all I could think about was the movie Like Mike. In the movie an orphan teen becomes a NBA superstar once he puts on an old pair on sneakers. Your story is very similar. The way you changed the story of Thataka is a way I never would have thought of, it is extremely unique. I wonder why you chose those Larry Bird shoes as the magical shoes. Also, how did this high school student afford these shoes? Had he been saving up money from work or did he have a rich family. I can most certainly understand why he would be interested in these shoes however. Were any other “weapons” considered for Manny to do battle with? Overall, this is a well written story. I look forward to reading other stories that you may post in the future. Best of luck!
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